I edited "Cody's Story"

I edited all of the bad grammar and the changed Cody's Story here is the edited one: 


Chapter 1

Cody at the beach

Hi, I am Cody and I love my owner.  my owner love's his van and his name is John. I am only one year old. I have never been in the van, and my mother is six year's old, and my favorite food is cow bones and John Said to me that he will go to the beach with the van and my mother so we went to The beach with mom, mom said that there is fish in the water I asked what is fish mom said that they are creatures that Live in water and also are owner fishes them and eats them. After a couple minutes John said that we should leave now, so we left

Chapter 2

My birthday

And when we got home I went on the couch and I slept Intel I Heard there was a knock on the door and it was Rex at the door you want to know Who Rex is, he is my Best friend and he is A little bit older than me he has been my best friend. He said do you want to go to the Park and play I asked mom if I can go. Mom said okay then I left I my birthday is coming up and I want some cow bones for my birthday we want to the park after that I went home mom said that my birthday is tomorrow. The next day I woke up to hear a knock at the door it all of my friends at the door I was Very happy to see them 

Chapter 3

Moving to a new house

It is after my birthday and I love my toys and my mom said that we might move in a couple days I was very unhappy to leave my friends but mom said that we will probably we will see our friends again sometime but that didn't help me at all I didn't say anything the next day I saw John packing up my toys. And after a few days, I saw a moving Truck coming to our house mom said that the truck is helping us Move. The truck left the next day I told Rex that we or going to Move Rex said he will miss me when I leave 

Chapter 4

I see my Friends again

A few years after we moved I saw a car come mean towards our house I saw Rex in the car he is bigger than a long time ago when he got to our house we played with the ball John was throwing the ball I always got the ball but I let Rex get the ball sometimes  



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                                                                                  thanks a lot for Reading this story


                                                                                             Story By E. Harris


and here is the none edited one:


Chapter 1

Cody at the beach

Hi, I am Cody and I love my owner.  my owner love's his van and his name is john. I am only one year old. I have never been in the van, and my mother is six year's old, and my favorite food is cow bones and john Said to me that he will go to the beach with the van and my mother so we went to The beach with mom, mom said that there is fish in the water I asked what is fish mom said that they are creatures that Live in water and also are owner fishes them and and eats them after A couple minutes john said that we should leave now so we left

Chapter 2

My birthday

And when we got home I went on the couch and I slept Intel I Heard there was a knock on the door and it was Rex at the door  you want to know Who is Rex he is my Best friend and he is A little bit older than me he has been my best friend for one month and he said do you want to go the Park and play I asked mom if I can go mom said that you can go but only if you go to the park I said ok to mom and then I left I told that my birthday is coming up and I want some cow bones for my birthday we want to the park after that I want home mom said that my birthday is tomorrow I was surprised I didn't know that the next day I woke up to hear a knock at the door it all of my friends at the door I was Very happy to see them 

Chapter 3

Moving to a new house

It is after my birthday and I love my toys and my mom said that we might move in a couple months I was very unhappy to leave my friends but mom said that we will probably we will see our friends again sometime but that didn't help me at all I didn't say anything the next day I saw John packing up my toys i wondered how soon we will leave or home and After a Few months I saw a Truck coming to or house mom said that the truck is helping us Move I wasn't pleased with this I didn't want to  leave my friends the truck left the next day I told Rex that we or going to Move Rex said he will miss me win I leave 

Chapter 4

I see my Friends again

A few months after we moved I saw a car come mean towards our house I saw Rex in the car he is bigger than a long time ago when he got to our house we played with the ball John was throwing the ball I always got the ball but I let Rex get the ball sometimes 

                                                               The End



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